 warrior goddess of words 2009-08-15 . chapter 1nice work. i can totally relate. |
 Isca 2009-08-11 . chapter 1"Another year of torture and inferiority." LOL. Such optimism :P.
"Another one walks the green mile!" I really like the comparions here between entering high school and entering death row.
"I'm in the wrong class." That's okay, on my first day of high school, I ended up walking into the classroom and I was the only girl there - apparently it was an all-male health class and someone had messed up my timetable. Good stuff. :P |
 Zippie The Nerd Gone Wild 2009-08-07 . chapter 1This seriously reminded me of my high school. Like no lie I was having a panic attack cause I was like "AH SCHOOL NO I DON'T WANT TO GO BACK THERE YET!" Overall for a dream this is very realistic. I like this poem, good job! :) |
 Amelia Whittaker 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Very interesting to read. These are fears I think all of us have had! I especially liked the "green mile" part. By the way, don't advertise in the summary that it has a slow start. I almost didn't read it because of that and now I don't regret reading your poem. |
 jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT. 2009-08-07 . chapter 1hahaha. lovely. i loved eet. |