i love the way you describe the surroundings and backgrounds

you're a master of words. they read like a real great, epic, novel. your messages are powerful without force. smooth, with sentiment, emotion, heart.

Wow. Another good one. It seems like the style keeps changing from poem to poem, but you've been able to pull off each one nicely. The imagery here was simple, but well-placed and enough to figure out what's going on. Not too vague or anything. The repetition of calling him a "broken man" was a really nice touch.

You're an awesome poet. Keep it up!