I'm really liking this story. Keep writing. :)

heya, great start. i can't wait to see how him possibly almost running over her leads to asking her to move in with him. he wants to make his image badder or something? ~ Alenor

I think it will be an awesome story! Can't wait for you to update!

~Raven

Great build up of characters... Looking forward to see how you develop the plot...

Off to a really good start! I care about the characters and I'm really looking forward to see how they interact. MORE PLEASE! :)