I definitely like this concept here! The first chapter's off to a good start, but it's always hard to tell the direction of the story in just a chapter. Anyways, hope you continue it - interested to see where it will go.

I think this is going to be an interesting story. Took me forever to get around to reading it but it looks like it will be good. Keep up the amazing work.

Ah, I want to find out what Ashley's book is about and why he's so angry about changing it...and Cain, I'm not sure about him yet but he seems interesting if not a little unexplained.

Update!

I finally got around to read this, ahem.

It is SO very different from Breathtaken or AMT in style, but you know what? I absolutely love it. Ashley is such a sarcastic ** that you can't help but laugh at his thoughts. Cain I'm not too sure about yet, but thumbs up to him for giving away his sexual preference in the first five minutes of their 'relationship'.

Also, lovely descriptions of the surroundings and everything else. So, you used to live in Oregon right? It's always easier to write about the familiar, lol.

-the wifey ^^

Awesome!

Great story! I like the depth of the characters and how well-developed they are. Please write more.

I'm really digging this so far, I like the story concept a lot. Looking forward to the next chapter :)