"Memories consume me." I really like this opening line - it's so dramatic and moving.

"I clutch at my cure
Just wishing fairytales could be real"

Beautiful! I loved the poem! (Sorry it took so long for me to review, there was a "technical glitch" with the login thing) :D

I like it. It's full of subtlety expressed emotion, but the last line bothered me. I'm not sure why, it just didn't seem to fit. Maybe it's the words "resume" and "normal" coming so soon after "fairytale". I don't know, but I would suggest something different.

Write on!

"Lets see if this can get better?...Let's

"I clutch at my cure"... this line confused me. What's the cure? Why aren't you using it?

"So then I could get the hell out of this"... I would either put this something like "this nightmare" or just end the line at out. Ending with this made me expect another word.

I like the part about fairytales and then going to your normal life. It made it more realistic than focusing just on fairytales. I also really like that second line, great image.

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hey,
i liked this poem for it's honesty and the simplicity in the expression of the ideas.

keep writing more like this (:

love,
~unsociable.

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