|Reviews for Once Upon the Written Word|
| simpleplan13 8/9/09 . chapter 1
I like this piece, I think you express the boys emotions pretty well. I also like the ending. I wasn't expecting it, though maybe I should have been. I'm kinda confused as to why the officer wanted his coat? Was it to look for the star? Anyway, nicely done.
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