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young and the reckless 2009-08-25 . chapter 1
i like this a whole lot.
because we all need to conquer our own fears and our own past.
we just sometimes need a little reassurance and support along the way.
favorite.
Kate Marshall 2009-08-09 . chapter 1
I liked the slight rhymes here and there. You had some reoccuring sounds and words that made the poem have a stronger rhythm. :)

I think the poem feels somewhat unfinished. When I read it, I can't help but want to wait for the rest of it... It lacks some 'closure'.

I so love your theme. It's cute and easy to relate to. I feel all warm and fuzzy. :D

From the Review Marathon! (link's in the profile)
-Peach/Kate
simpleplan13 2009-08-09 . chapter 1
I really like this. I think it's a really great play on the whole skeletons in your closet thing. I also like the different reactions you used. They are very fitting to how people in real life act. Very sweet ending.

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