 Kate Marshall 2009-08-09 . chapter 1I liked the slight rhymes here and there. You had some reoccuring sounds and words that made the poem have a stronger rhythm. :)
I think the poem feels somewhat unfinished. When I read it, I can't help but want to wait for the rest of it... It lacks some 'closure'.
I so love your theme. It's cute and easy to relate to. I feel all warm and fuzzy. :D
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