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Little girl Big world 2009-08-12 . chapter 1
a short simple lovely and adorable piece!
:)
j.k.l.h 2009-08-09 . chapter 1
I finally got the updates ;) again with the simple sweetness that I've come to be so fond of when it comes to your work. Very nicely done

Kattie
simpleplan13 2009-08-09 . chapter 1
I really like the format here. It works really well to have that part in the middle and the other left justified. I think you also did well with the bolding and italics. However, I think in the second line, you could omit the you are. My everything by itslef would be less repetitive and maybe more powerful? just a though

Anyway really nice piece. Very bittersweet.

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