Love this story. Very good, can't wait for the next chapter!

Just finished reading all 16 chapters in one sitting! Love the twist at the end.. which i expected after reading the reviews by accident.. Heh.

The pacing of the story seems kinda off to me, but overall I like your story so far :P. Definitely a shocker to hear she's pregnant, I don't see that information being very easy to swallow lol. I'll be sure to watch out for you to update this!

Wow, pregnant, I really wasn't expecting that! Can't wait for next chapter ;)

I had a kind of dramatic song playing while reading the end, which made it kind of... really dramatic. I was thinking of all different things that could be wrong but... not this!

A whole week! You monster! (just kidding ily. D:)

U-update. ;-; P-p-p-please.

hahha It's like when Carol is saying "This is serious Grace. We really need to figure out how to move forward with this" Grace is thinking in her head,

'Just be my girlfriend already!' haha.

Love the name of this chapter. :D Outback has good food, so I've heard.

By the way you shouldn't stress about updating! (some stories don't update for months) And no need to apologize, school and work are important. C: School and work first, and then everything else! that's what my grandmother taught me at least. :O

Keep updating :) Nice add

This was nice... please keep writing!

Really good chapter! The riding together part was a really good idea, and the kiss scene, that was so good, I really liked when Grace said “I'm sorry Carol. But I warned you!”

Please update soon!

love the part where they're riding together on the horse. didn't see that coming. also, the part where Grace says “I'm sorry Carol. But I warned you!” i can just picture the look on their faces. haha.

Yes. I enjoyed it. *.*

I did, but at the same time didn't see that coming.

Can't wait for you to update!

This is really great! I love it. More please!

I think this is one of the best paced story's I've read yet! A lot I read lately move too fast.

haha, I've had pizza like every day this week.

Oh, and I agree with Sunny Bites! :)

Oh Grace is in troble...! I hope she gives in to Carol soon...

man I love ur story. great job on it. Just a sugestion is that I Think u should have some background details on Eliot's and Grace's marrage. Like if Grace was forced into marrying Eliot by her step-father or something along the lines of it. But it's only a sugestion. keep on going! Speling and grammer are very good