umm... dont quite konw what to say about this essay. you need quite a bit of work when you are taking quotes from someone else's work, and quite a bit of your information is outdated. Many of your arguments are weak if best (in particular your argument against ethics), but even your scientific arguments are pretty very weak. The other thing is that you bring in political points that have nothing to do with your essay. Personally I think you should revise your arguments if you decide to revisit this essay again.

Some Essay, not only is it wrong on many levels but its written poorly too.