YUP! Update soon! I wanna read more! :)

It was nicely written and I didn't find any bad errors. Just a couple commas you didn't need, if I am not mistaken.
Over all the story was good, just not my usual cup of tea. Though, I can't help but wonder - is this fiction, or actually an experience? I'd like it if you kept writing on, I am sure you can come up with little scenes with these two that would be fun to read.

soo good!

Sorry little sis hahaha I commented on your story with your account! My bad =/ hahaha you look lame now.
Love you

This sounds very interesting! I think you should continue. I simply must know where it goes from there.

Lovely! I like how there are so many directions this story could go in :)