|Reviews for Grand Captain Shelley|
| Narq 11/19/09 . chapter 1
Hey, overall I think you did get that feel of a seamen laughing and joking and singing in this song so well done here.
About the "north wind" maybe you could do "north' wind" or something like that, because as you reasoned, people did shorten words such as flowers and ect, but they also did put down the aprosophe for the missing character(s).
Dunno, just a suggestion. I really liked this song though!
| Said Author 8/12/09 . chapter 1
I liked this! Loved the rhyme scheme and the way you repeated parts of the stanza with "For Shelley was a captain grand"-and just that line is very cool. Nice work! :)
P.S. Thanks for the review. :}