"I shiver in secret ecstasy,"
& "I cling to your every word, listen to your every rhyme,"
-My favorite lines in this.
The whole piece was great. It flowed nicely.
This line though, "We’re miles away physically from each other’s heart," I think could have done without the word physically, it just didn't seem to fit or something, in my opinion.
Well written, I enjoyed reading this! :)