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Guy1122 2009-08-26 . chapter 1
This is sad... To me this is saying that someone that you loved comes in to say "goodbye" but doesn't want to wake you so walks out. And never comes back...

I could be completely wrong, but for some reason that's the thought that came to me.

I like it. Makes me feel... odd.
fleur de l'est 2009-08-12 . chapter 1
Love is most dangerous at its best.
I like the ruthless tone of this poem.
~fleur
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