hey.
i love the first half about the sunset and everything about the waves and things, i still liked the raining part and how it was cute that they were getting soaked in the rain and hid under a tree. i thouhgt that was cool. but i thoughtthe first half was better.
happy writing, from i'm just a dreamer :)

Decent, I liked the idea of it, but I think you could work a little more on the general structure...like word-choice and stuff.

Decent job though (: