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Faithless Juliet 2009-09-05 . chapter 1
Again, this one is a bit cryptic and abstract. I liked your opening description and title of ‘dead rodents bones’ because you use the word bones it makes me think of something very old, already decayed and in disuse. It makes me feel that the conflict between the characters has been going on for a while, and it will continue to smolder. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)
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