holy crap! infinitely better. i love elves, continue.

Poor guy, that was a horrible day! D:
Very interested in how this'll play out.


I've never read your other version, and after hearing that it was a remake, was going to... until I saw that you were threatening to cut off our ears. D:
And I DO happen to like my ears where they are...

I think I like this beginning way better than the other one. Funny I just read the other version of this story. I like this version more already. I'm glad there won't be any Mpreg. Surprisingly over used. I can't wait to see the changes you've done.

aww. jobless. alot like me! X3 yay...cause shortcuts through the woods always end well *sarcasm*

oh my god... I remember this story... you weren't kidding about changing it though. I liked the first one. although there were points where I was too afraid to read... I'm sure you're well aware of what they are. lol But good for you if you're back to writing again. I really did enjoy the last one and I'm looking forward to reading this one. Better then me though i can't look at some of my old work yet. too painful >__< keep it up.
DS

Looking forward to the redux!

Excellent, I am one of the old readers and this is one of my old favs. I like how its starting! Nice job!!

I think I've read the original before but it was so long ago I can't remember what the story was about anymore XD The title I remember...

Glad to see a rewrite ^^ I'm sure I'll like this one even better than the previous version since I'm not really into MPREG so it'll suit my taste in stories better since the Mpreg will be taken out XD

Hope to read more soon ^^ Great first chapter so far~

Hahaha talk about a crappy day XD This was really fun. Great job.