LOVED it!
wish this is how it always happened, but *sigh* of course i doesn't. well, thats okay. its life.

Love it! It's funny that she punched him XD

:D Seriously loving your writing...! Hey I want a Tyler too! But I don't have a sister... hehe
Great story... again!!

Haha I enjoyed their banter, reminds me of some people I know. So it definitely sounded realistic. And it had a sweet ending, which of course is fantastic. I only spotted one tiny error
"Tyler then spoke quietly, I could barely him when he said,"
Just missing a "hear" between barely and him. But thats all
otherwise I enjoyed it, short and sweet :) nice work.

lol! That was great. You punch a guy, then he becomes your boyfriend! Great job.I love it!

That's a really good one chapter story! You should make it into something bigger. I'd definately read it! :)