 beneaththefalls 2009-12-05 . chapter 6 Wow, my first time reading His Saving Grace and its as amazing as I thought it would be! I absolutly cannot wait until the next chapter. Poor Grace, she fighting the two front war for absolutly no reason. |
 Dynamene 2009-11-29 . chapter 6Hehe, more conflict, just what I like :) I do feel bad for Oliver though, he's such a sweetheart! Nice to see a little of Jack and Talia again xx |
 Kandyber 2009-11-21 . chapter 6its been over a month. Im having withdraws! |
 middiegurl08 2009-11-20 . chapter 6Let me just say how excited I was to find this story! So Much To Learn is one of my favorite stories and I was crazy excited to see a sequel. I was slightly sad when I found out it wasn't all about Talia and Jack, but honestly, I'm loving this! I want Grace and Alex to just wake up and be in love already! But where would the fun be in that? haha. This is so fantastic! I can't wait to read more! Update soon! |
 melaniedrean 2009-11-01 . chapter 6 i really like so much to learn so imagine my delight when i read that you wrote a sequel.
It's still well writen and the character have dept. I love alex i'm so happy you choose him such a bad boy (and not the cliche for once), but i'm a little put out by grace, who appear to be so eager to please ( wake up girl !).
And what happen to Matt ? Mikki and Simone broke up ? I hope we will have an idea of the situation in the continuation.
Finally i will just congratulate you because it's a great beginning,and the suspens is just killing me, i will follow your story. Thank you for this good moment. |
 surroundedANDalone 2009-10-27 . chapter 6Once again, stellar dialogue and lots of bits and pieces that help shape the characters and give the readers insight into their lives. Got to love it. For some reason I never picked up on the fact that Talia was short for Natalia (which is close to my name, yay)...I'm probably just slow.
Great conversation and explaination between the young and old generations on marriage and such.
Watch for some repetitions...in one part you say 'When he shot her a look in reply that just as clearly replied'. But that doesn't happen often...I do stuff like that all the time.
You give the reader a good feeling/more insight into Bridunna as a setting and their way of life/the tension at being thrust back into it. The bit with Grace's cousin and Alex was priceless. You wove it in well with the "15 minutes previously" piece. And yay for switching up points of view.
Nicely long and well done chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
 daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2009-10-26 . chapter 6Oh, I thought Talia and Jack were married! I'm such a feminist on so many aspects but I'm also soo traditional lol, two parts of me that are very contradictory. But I understand her reasoning, they really didn't have time! lol and she's right, the wedding IS for the people. For me, it would be for my mother hahaa.
And poor, confused Grace=/ Olivers such a good guy but Alex..well, Alex is Alex. How tough, poor Grace. Excellent chapter, lots happening. Update soon! |
 Jstar888 2009-10-22 . chapter 6Just came across this story, late as per usual but at least the party is still going on!
I am loving this story so far. It is such a very different tone from that of SMTL that it is refreshing to see that you have developed Grace to the point of her having her own voice. There are times though where I thought that her voice slipped and yours might have come through but they were pretty inconsequential. I would encourage you to stamp down on that a bit. You have made this story so entirely its own that I actually found the references and inclusion of Talia and Jack mildly patronizing.
Great work though. Keep it up. |
 ess3sandra 2009-10-22 . chapter 6It was really nice to see Talia again. I didnt really understand how hard it was in this hick town for either of them. when reading this i think of bon temps true blood. the small town, the resentment, the annoying people, the mean ones. when reading this chapter i actually feel sorry for him, gracie doesn't deserve him if shes going to play him like that. well yes, they havnet realised that they both like eachother but she is being bitchy. |
 dwpea 2009-10-21 . chapter 6 amazing! as usual. so much life in the characters. I really like Alex, he defines the story, at least for now. Oliver is just a pain, does he have any redeeming aspects? i guess he's nice and so..
anyways thank you for posting yet another wonderful chapter. Will be waiting for next one! Keep it up =] |
 Jen 2009-10-20 . chapter 6 I think I need to go back and read the first story again and then start this one over, because I'm pretty lost. Not taking anything away from your writing, because that is great as usual. I just don't remember much about these characters and it is hard to make a connection. Hopefully when I reread I will have something better to report. |
 asianinvasion0530 2009-10-20 . chapter 6Huh, I didn't even notice that Jack and Talia weren't married haha. But now I know why.
Aww I love tension between Grace and Alex. I wish she would just come to her senses and see that Oliver is not the one for her. But of course that's probably not going to happen until the end of the story. |
 shutterbaby 2009-10-20 . chapter 6Damn, there's some jealousy happening on BOTH sides now. :) |
 abmoreland 2009-10-20 . chapter 6Loved this chapter so much! It was so great to see Talia at her best sarcastic self, and love that she was looking for Georgia to throw up on someone. I like that they are not married, the love that her and Jack have can't be contained by a piece of paper. I really hate the small town stuck up attitudes of these people of Bridunna. Love that Alex is there making everything so interesting. And making Grace really confused! Ha, she doesn't even know what she is feeling anymore. What will it take to make her see the reality that she belongs with Alex. Can't wait to see how that happens. I almost wanted Amanda to say what she was going to say, and Alex bust in to save her again. Was hoping for a bigger scene at the party, but that probably would have been over doing it. Can't wait to read more soon. Want to see more of Maxxie and Desi too. |
 Chryse 2009-10-20 . chapter 6Drama drama drama. I actually like the line you start w/ about pedophiles - there's quite a bit of truth in the statement, unfortunately. Glad you got unstuck! Update soon! ;) |