you are real good at writing poems!

its twisted, unexpected, yet favorable. I really, really like this. It inspires me in ways, of the emotions a character in one of my novels may feel.

Time is a lie,
a shadow, we fail to identify.

I like that part, it's a great piece.

I think it makes perfect sense! The labyrinth bit is a good metaphor/similar for it. I really like the way that everything was worded here. I don't know anything about poetry, but I liked the style of this one.