|Reviews for hold your fire and maybe then i'll hold your hand|
| Little girl Big world 8/12/09 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this!
I like the end,
"if we make it through this dead, o g."
I like how you said dead or breathing and not dead or alive.
A great piece :)
| Ice 8/12/09 . chapter 1
Wow. Crisp and even. I like it a lot. Well written.