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| Reviews for hold your fire and maybe then i'll hold your hand |
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   Little girl Big world 8/12/09 . chapter 1I absolutely love this! I like the end, "if we make it through this dead, o g." I like how you said dead or breathing and not dead or alive. A great piece :) |
| Ice 8/12/09 . chapter 1 Wow. Crisp and even. I like it a lot. Well written. |
