I hope you update soon. It looks like it been a while but I really enjoy your story
Forever and For Always,
LHNT

Your story is quite lovely, I hope you update it, plus no offence if Artemis was your favorite, I love Hera, I feel as if she has always been alone because of Zeus's ways with women, I would like to see ore of Hera.

Poor Artemis... Please update!

AWESOME! Please continue this story! I love it so far!

Very interesting! I like how you make the gods modern! This is a really cool story and i can't wait to read more!

I'm so behind... You should see my inbox it's crazy! So of course I came to yours first... those other people can wait... amazing chapter! Sorry I'm so late in reviewing and reading!

This Ephialtes dude is bad news... kidnapping two goddesses... I don't think that's going to go over too well... and the Otus guy seems kind of like a push-over... He just does whatever he's told... grr... but then it's not like he has a choice I suppose...

And Hera is a jerk... what? Oh of course I still hate you... but you really think I'd let you just suffer and die?

Yes! I do! lol...

Awesomeful! ... I don't know if chapter 3 is suppose to be up yet but there was an update but then it wasn't there and now I'm confuzzled... lol... Keep up the fantasic work, chica! :) :) :)

Well, now we know more about the bad guys, anyway. Giants... Interesting...

Thanks for updating!

This was full of awesomeness. I've never in my entire life read a story based off of Greek Mythology, but I'm really glad that this was the first one. In eighth grade we had an entire section of the semester dedicated to learning the stories from the Greeks and all of the gods and whatnot. I can hardly remember anything from then, but this is just an awesome bit of literature that I can't wait to read more of!

Wow, Otus needs to get to Artemis FAST. Ephialtes might hurt her!

good beginning. I've always liked greek mythology and i'm interested to see you gave them a more kind of human quality. Should be interesting to see how it turns out

I LIKE this. a lot a lot a lot! I do hope you continue with it. I think I know where you're going with the whole "no man, nor god can defeat them" bit. A little Macbeth, maybe?

Really this is wonderfully done and I look forward to reading more when you update.

Cheers!

-Ace

::jaw drops::

WOW, you paint such a vivid picture! This is fantastic. I'm just going to keep reading, and get back to you...

Wow...

-Ace

Plz Update!

Please keep this up! I love it

awesome story! I love it so far! Keep on writing- I can't wait to hear more!