Wow, this one just left me feeling... WOW...Amazing. And SO true. One of the BEST poem I've read. :D

Wow! This is really incredible! This really matches a lot of the girls I remember from high school and some I know from college. Well said.

This is a good story about what the people who usually aren't reconized feel about the popular kids. But doesn't the popular person have feelings too. They feel sad, and have bad days. You are a really good author and you can really capture feelings, but can't you do both sides. Show their unhappiness, their hardships because then you are showing human on both sides.

Nice. I like it. Very true.

Every school has one of those "It" girls, or several...ha. Good job on writing this.

Rae

;)eha ha!

now thas a gud poetry ryt here.

[d only real freak is d 1 cal'n othrs freaks..]

&i hate it wen grls say ther fat

wen ther realy jst skin &bones!

com on..it makes us average ppl feel obese.