That was amazing! I wasn't used to reading it as being narrated, but once I got the flow, it was absolutely haunting. By the end I had a shiver that ran through me and that's something I don't often get.

February 19, 2013 was so sad. It truly is amazing how different the lives of two people who live so close to each other can be. One wrong decision in life, one mistake, can take us down a path that destroys us. What happened to Hannah that made her life go this way? And, what happened to James that made it all just fall into place for him?

December 23, 2011, watching her father's funeral from a distance-that was sobering.

Very good piece.