"Nausea in my head - a sick sweat that breaks my bones." This line is phenomenal. I love it. I've always wanted to express this 'feeling' before but never knew how to - thanks for enlightening me! I really like this entire piece, actually - especially the 'bent into angles' and 'night vision' parts - WOW. :D

this is just great. i love the
flopping fish legs. you
know i've been thinking for
a few weeks about how writers often
get into this position of writing
about being on the brink of creative
thresholds. i myself am often hung
up this way. what we must do is
jump through into the next level and
never look back again and accept that
we can already write in the new way.
we needn't learn how or worry whether
anyone can follow our footprints.

aha, yes, well put. I think all writers can relate to this.

I love this.
Absolutely beautiful. I feel this way often.

This poem is why I sleep with bits of paper under/in the pillowcase and several pens down the side. The final stanza is my favourite, I don't think the first two need the separation to be honest.