cute :) i love the scene style

I literally 'awwed' out loud for the first time. That was undeniably cute.

Wow. This is amazing. Really clever. I love all the scene changes that take the reader through the piece while also helping to narrate it. Also absoultely adorable.

I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY SO MUCH RIGHT NOW.

The characters were AWESOME. I loved Jen, she actually reminded me a bit of me (though I usually have an average of 0-1 guys chasing me at any given time, so...yeah.) And Alex was so SWEET. Can I date Alex please?

I'm glad she turned James down, he was a jerk. ;)

(Psst...I'll be PM-ing you soon on FanFic. I typed out half of one yesterday, but it got deleted because the computer was being stupid, so I got annoyed and turned it off. I've just been really busy lately with college, and I wanted you to know I didn't forget you, and I'm sorry it's taking so long!)

But I really loved this story, especially the part where Jen's towel fell down. How embarrassing! O.O

Kayz, I'm done babbling now...Great job, as always. :)

I have one thing- and one thing only- to say about this one-shot:























AW!!

:D

~Mo~