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Reviews For: Barak and the Beanstalk
Rightest Rachel 2009-11-08 . chapter 1
*laughs hysterically* good one!
simpleplan13 2009-09-04 . chapter 1
On a personal level I don't like the piece because I disagree with the political views portrayed. Also, I would categorize it as political, not horror. However, I do like the idea. I think it's a great way to make a political statement. Using the form of a fairytale is really creative. I also like the three characters that were there, though I didn't get why you changed the hen to a goose or who the woman was in the original fairytale. I found that a bit confusing. Still well done.

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LostInMe 2009-08-19 . chapter 1
Fantastic! It's great to read something like this for a change, instead of the pro-Obama rubbish that the media keeps coming up with.

I am proud to say that I never wanted Obama for president.

I love the way you took an old fable and turned it into something new! Really great job!
Sergeant Rock 2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Okay...interesting.
SirScott 2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Good fable. Two thumbs up!

~SirScott
Reclusive Watermelon 2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Right on.
Mirabella 2009-08-14 . chapter 1
Nice one!
I like the moral at the end especially, and the ironic (right word?) humour in this. :)
The rewrite of an old fable into something modernly relevant is quite clever. :)
Well done.
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