Be careful how you use "too" "to" and "two"... and rethink your sentence structures... but the idea of the story is good!

I heart how they dress too. You know, aside from the pants half way down the ** thing and the smoking thing. But that's not just with skaters. Hate it so much. Especially when people try to do it around me. Anyway, loved it, great job! :D I also like your main character. She's cool.

loved it..
very nice.. :)

I'm not going to lie... I was slightly offended by this. I hope you didn't intentionally mean to do that, but I've been a gymnast for 6 years and I've been on my school's Varsity cheer team for about three months.

I think this kind of falls into stereotypes, and it really bothers me because cheerleading and gymnastics (especially competitive, the kind I did), are difficult to do. Plus, I'm not sure about other people's schools, but my school's cheer coaches run the tryouts, not the cheerleaders. They can't just kick people out because they don't like them.

That was a really good story. I liked the mean girl perspective. Your other one shots are lovely and adorable too. You're a good writer. Whilst wandering around your profile I read about your erm unexplainable love for the quote by William Congreve which I found funny since I love that quote a lot for some inexplicable reason lol. Btw did you know thats not the entire quote,if you didn't well the real quote is 'Heav'n hath no rage like love to hatred turn'd nor hell a fury like a woman scorned',both are lovely. Anyway back to the story skater boys rock and I'm glad Deigha got hers.

Definitely not so mean... I do like her character though, somehow! :D It's a cute story.

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aw, such a cute ending!
made me laugh!
ahaha, so adorable! :]

A few grammatical errors and spelling errors like using "to" instead of "too" or "of instead of "off". Interesting idea though. :D

aww. so cute!

That was flipping amazing.
My favourite kind of story - nice =D

Oh my god I loved it. It shows you shouldnt have stereotypes because not all queen bees and head cheerleaders are cows:) and people think they aree so its good u put it in a different way.

When I first saw the summery, I was just like REALLY? I didn't think I'd like it much.

Because I used to be a prep, popular, a total bi+ch. I used to think I was so cool because I was able to bi+ch people out and make them feel lower than $hit. I didn't have the name brands or anything like that. But people liked that I was disrespectful to teachers, and other kids. It's the people who have no balls and are just like you who like that kinda person.

But then I decided to just read it. It was written by YOU, so it couldn't have been horrible.

I understood her anger at the beggining with the girl sleeping with her friend's boyfriend. She should have known better.

and yeah, she acted like a bi+ch, and yeah she was a cheerleader but still..

And with that skater boy liking her? Ha, that was kinda funny, my boyfriend is skater. his ex-girlfriends were preppy bi+ches so I could understand the liking there.

The flowers were a great touch. Cause everybody has feelings, no matter what people think. And her not looking behind her was too. I wouldn't have been able to resist the urge, no matter how stupid.

The cheerleading thing? If you actually are doing the flips and routins, and are not just shaking your hips and screaming, than I believe it's a sport. Cause it's a lot a physical work to do some of the moves they do. I read an old 17 article about how guy cheerleaders had the football team try doing some of the moves they do and only 1/20 were able to cheerleading moves.

But they ended up together.

I really liked reading this.

-Im Just M!ssundaztood

Hey this is good. I like it. I like the way the story goes, I like the way you describe the characters. Keep writing:)

Ah, Deigh seems pretty mean to me. . . But she's like that just in front of her friends, right? She's not really like that, right? Eheh.

Anyway, I think you've got a really interesting concept here. Not many people risk telling their story through the POV of a "mean girl", and the fact that it's a romance makes it even better. I like the realization at the end that she'd softened. That's always good. lol

- KE