 Neon-Sunglasses 2009-11-13 . chapter 14 NOO! please continue this I really like it :) |
 fluffhy 2009-11-07 . chapter 14Hey I like it! And if you have stope useing fictionpress, then what web place are you using?? |
 horse.whisperer96 2009-09-26 . chapter 14CONTINUE! It's really good- don't stop! |
 Marty Sunshine 2009-09-10 . chapter 14CONTINUE! I want to know what happens next! |
 Yereanth16 2009-09-10 . chapter 14I hate when they do that! do what you are more comfortable doing honey^_^ |
 Yereanth16 2009-09-03 . chapter 13Damion is interesting but I like payton more.-. Rae is pretty cool and I liked the song she sang. wonder what will happen next
-Y- |
 zagraet 2009-08-26 . chapter 1have you, by any chance, read 'my immortal'? |
 Love2read765 2009-08-17 . chapter 9Great! Keep going! :) |
 Love2read765 2009-08-17 . chapter 8Really good! I hope you update again soon! :) |
 The Parisian Guanaco 2009-08-17 . chapter 8Did you write this song yourself? =) Because it's good! |
 Jessica Darnet 2009-08-16 . chapter 7Haha! (But as slow as that whole week was, I made it to Friday with my sanity, and my courage was still intact.)
That's funny! |
 Jessica Darnet 2009-08-16 . chapter 6You should elaborate more on why she had to sit down, but, other than that, I LOVED this chapter. |
 Jessica Darnet 2009-08-16 . chapter 5Uh-oh; poor Damion; he's gonna be helpless without her! |
 Jessica Darnet 2009-08-16 . chapter 4Is she gonna end up liking Payton?
Another great chapter! |
 Jessica Darnet 2009-08-15 . chapter 3Aww, how touching! Closer than her own brother? So sweet.
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