This is good, I liked it. Plus, it's nice to see the P.O.V coming from the male, and I found it adorable.

Now: Im not a big fan of dialogue concentrated stories, but the lines are well done and the dialogue is funny so it was bearable. but perhaps the biggest draw to this story would be the girl, using the actor sand the male's response was funny.

I hope you keep up the excellent work ^^

aw that is so cute =] you should make it into a story

If this was facebook i would have pressed the like button :)