I'm not quite sure what to make of this yet, since I've never read anything like this before. But don't take it badly! I really, really like your story, and I want to see what happens. So don't stop updating, or I'll...I'll...well, I'll think of something.

~Evvy

P.S. You described Charlie as a boy of about fifteen or fourteen, but for some odd reason, his character comes off as someone a little younger. It may be because he acts kinda cute sometimes. lol. Like that part where he says, "It has finally happened. I've gone crazy. I can't say I'm completely surprised." Haha. That's my favorite part so far. :)