|Reviews for dalliance|
| fatbird33 12/17/09 . chapter 1
very nice. good descriptions
| Little girl Big world 8/15/09 . chapter 1
-Amazing ways to describe these things!
The ending line was perfect and I like that it was separated from the rest of the piece. It's powerful enough to be it's own line but still flows nicely with the rest of the piece.
So much said in a short poem
& amazing imagery :D
P.S. Thanks for the reviews!