I like the notion that an inanimate object - like a glow stick - can save a life, it’s comforting in this dark world of ours. You showed this idea really well.

The overall piece felt a bit short - more like an idea then a concluded poem. But I enjoyed the read just the same. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)

"and it was just bright enough
to get her through."
An uplifting ending, such a sweet little story! :)

I don't know why, but there's something really good about this. It's almost...unintentionally good. I don't mean to offend you though. Once again, good poe.