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Reviews For: The Unyielding
Chipped Wool 2009-10-25 . chapter 1
This is kind of ironic, me finding this and all. Not too long ago I was wondering what the worst fate could possibly be, and being forgotten, and never again passing through someone's mind /forever/ was one of those options.

I thought this was a great story. I'm favoriting it.
The Quill's Tip 2009-09-15 . chapter 1
I really loved this! I could imagine the entire scene, and I could see the cruelty of Caligula's being. What was very provoking was the incestuous relationship for one, but mainly it is the psychology behind Adrasteia's actions. The reader does need to stretch far to fully understand her mental process, but I think its a powerful process understand.

I could see no grammatical or spelling errors, so kudos to your Beta.

I honestly would like to see another fanfiction about Caligula, and Drusilla, and the sisters, and their relation to their people. Its fascinating, the little hints you gave into Caligula's world.

This was amazing!

The Quill's Tip.
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