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oscar brennan aka orlando bloom is obviously not going to marry someone hes never met
retarded story
i dont think someone would quit a job to sulk about not marrying OB.

interesting...

Great story

oh and to peterfolly, even though you might not read this and i dont care:

FYI, the author is in the HIGHEST english class and obviously you are a dick head for not noticing it and assuming random bs.

a good day to you.
oh sorry, i said the wrong thing.

i hope you go to hell.

hey ally (:

&& if you havnt figured yet, its me. bazza. bonny. bon. onny bay. supreme overlord of the universe and more.

i have FINALLY read your story and it makes me lol and smile.
AND its uber good and its writting by YOU which makes it a hundred times cooler. (:

im also reviewing cos i dont want kittens to die ):

wel...im not rly 1 for romance, but the story itself was quite good and its quite enjoyable to read (definitely more enjoyable than twilight :P),the humour ranged from pretty good to meh-ish. While the story seemed to scatter in different directions at times in the story...other than that, it was pretty good...and better than a LOT of other stories iv read.

i always look forward to reading these

okay

weirdo

i bet everyone in phoebe's workplace were just looking at her oddly everyday, wondering when her weirdo moments would occur... like today for instance.
it would be really interesting to read what happens next.

if they meet, phoebe will probably froth at the mouth and swoon. he'll probably catch her romantically and then go flying... not.

cool story. cant wait to see what happens next. i dont know what comes after stalker, but it will be interesting to find out what does come after it.

good job!
x

this is a very... interesting... part of the story. Phoebe has gone from fangirl to stalker in about 0.5 seconds. What an achievement. Congratulations.
i wonder if she will find oscar? it would be really funny to read about that.
If phoebe keeps doing this, the most she'll ever get out of oscor is a restraining order and a creepy hat that shouts 'boo' everytime you look at it. good luck, weirdo.

good story. cant wait for the next bit

another chapter posted. in under 2hrs. BRAVO. that's got to count for something, right?

weel, i see there's a turn in events at the end there. things are looking brighter. but would it be wrong on my part to assume something will possibly happen in chapter 5 to bring our lovely female protagonist (with the risk of sounding too cliché,) back down to earth?
after all, with such a self-hazardous heroine, one can only guess.

um, not sure if any of that word vomit made any sense or not.

until next time
Joy xoxo

you seem to have ended this on a mysterious note. it confuses me a little -but then again, all in due time the readers will find out, right?

GAWD your writing is talented.

really really can't wait for an update.

yours faithfully
Joy xoxo

This story kicks ** .I really like the plot and I hope you can continue this story .
x :D your a great writer

Interesting. Geez, I wonder who Oscar is? ORLANDO BLOOM! Nice story. She said 'fiance'. Is that Oscar? What happens next? Cool story, funny about the breaking shoes. Never imagined someone running through the streets with high heels, let alone broken heels. Maya (Miranda Kerr?) Karen (Elizabeth Swann/ Keira Knightley?)

OMG. love the little details throughout the chapter. shaight. just realised you've been writing in present tense the whole time... gee, I'd probably never manage. butt, I've got to hand it to you. you've done me, X and the english institution proud.

No grammar errors -nor any punctuation mistakes. you fer-eak. (meant in a good way, btw)

LOLOLOL. love the new plot installment. damn, you left it on a cliffie.

send me a message when you update, or i'll just regularily (sp?) check if you've posted the 3rd chapter.

Sincerely
Joy.S xoxo

ASSWAFFLE. muthafudgin genitals!

Peter Folley, mate, your a complete fugger. for GAWD'S SAKE, grow a pair and create an account or log on -regarding if you have one. seriously?? i'll spell out my opinion..

I.d-o-n-t.s-e-e.y-o-u.f-u-d-g-e-n.w-r-i-t-e.a.s-t-o-r-y.

The aliens forget to remove their anal probe?

LOL. LOVE IT. jus imagined your actual voice telling the story.

can definitely see the resemblance (sp?) in the initials. clever.

I love the one-liners that are present every few sentences; (not sure if i'm making sense here, but) i'm referring to those simple lil sentences like "Maybe not." at the end and "The male half." you know, those type of lil quirks.

don't actually think i'm making much sense here.

but anywho, can now see how Mr Falk adores you.

you should be PAID, woman! (um, for writting online for free, not "special" services)

gosh, finally got around to reviewing the story.

Sincerely
Joy.S xoxo