LOL! I loved this!

Yay! I can imagine vampires who fall in love with each other, then marry, then go on a honeymoon, then produce baby vampires... I mean, Will is such a lucky vampire, since he has never been bitten by another vampire before.

Lol the two social servents were good

Lol this was good:P

Fantabulous! I love ur writing and I was thinking about ur story 2day and when i got the email a few minutes ago i was full of joy :-)

Well, well, well... Porter, I still cannot believe you're going this way! For all you readers out there, (spoiler deleted) dies and Will and Sam start (spoiler deleted).

awesome story! I love your writing, but you should proof read a bit more, because a noticed a good number of spelling mistakes, more in the last chapters, but really, great story!
p.s. I love the part about "human" fishing, lol.

Hey... I got ur PM. I was going to review but I forgot to and I was planning to do it but it slipped my mind. This chapter is very well written and I like how the Will/Sam relationship is budding. It's weird... theres this show and a vamp is named Bill (same thing as Will) and his friend is named Sam. Btw, can u describe Sam's physical features? I just like having a picture of the character in my mind.
-TayTay1018

So...What does she do?

yay i like this chapter like all the rest

I understand, take your time with your writing

haha i liked this chapter

Ten to one he kills them both before the day's out.
=D

It's pretty good writing, even if it's not my favorite genre of stories. The info you told everyone about the story in real life was a lot different from the actual story itself. Stay sharp! From your best friend.

Good chapter! i don't know why but i have a feeling that lane is the hunter