nice chapter. Liked Taen's rantings.

Things are getting very interesting!

So Taen doesn't just want power, but also some...ethnic cleansing?

I wonder what is up with that "recall" order anyways...can't wait to find out.

nice chapter. Sorry, a bit behind, will get caught up!

Nice chapter there.

Very nice, I loved the last two chapters. One question...is chapter 17 all in italics on purpose?

Very nice, can't wait for the next chapter!

Another good chapter. Things are interesting.

Hey. This is very wonderful, I like the scenes, and I like the insight into the languages. The bannister scene was funny, also.

I enjoyed this chapter. I wonder what will happen next.

Very nice chapter, as always!

Very interesting chapter. And it's interesting what Elisa heard. Is she now understanding the local language better?

Very nice, you even came up with details of their culture..."Salam" you took from Arabic, right? Anyways, I can't wait to see how things will be next chapter...Li na make chapter 9 interesting! *laughs*

Nice story, did you ever read the Robert E. Howard Conan Novels? They are great, I recommend to you. Best wishes.