Oh my! I absolutely have fallen in love with this story! I also read Diary, while it was still in progress, but never got to review. -.- That is different for this story though! I cannot wait to read more, and as an 'artist' myself I really loved Ms.Young's outake on the definition of art! Inspiring really...and it challenges me to define my own definition of art. ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL AND EXCELLENTLY DETAILED WITH A NICE FLOW! Please, keep it up!

Alycia

Yay, a friend!

I really liked this chapter. Art is my favorite subject, even if I'm not that good. LOL. It's fun. I love the way you put alot of characteristics into the characters, without taking a long time. It kept me interesting. I love the teacher. :D :D

I really liked this chapter. They way you wrote this character seemed so realistic to me. I don't know. I just really like it. ^.^"

I've really enjoyed this story so far. That section where try was used so much was, well, perfect. I only wonder how many different characters are here in this story, and I suppose that as it goes on, more and more will come together.

Also, in the first part, the only thing that gave me a slight problem was the wooden steps simile, where you compared the little girl's weight of eighty pounds to three-hundred pounds. With your creativeness, I think a better simile could be found for the stairs creaking.

Anyway, continue the good work.

Aw. That's sad. I don't get it when people are talking two seats behind you about someone, and I'm just sitting here thinking... "Okay... don't they know that everyone can hear everything that they're saying?" It's just really stupid. Good chapter.

Haha, she sounds like me. Art is my favorite class in school, because there is no wrong answer when you're working. I can't stand stuffy rooms with to many words. I need room to think. :D :D :D

Good chapter. :D I think it could turn out good. :D

I really liked this and I'm looking forward to reading more. The last few paragraphs really get me into it. Anyway, I'm gonna read more now. :D

I like this so far. You're very good at using similes to describe the scenery, and all of it's very believable. Keep writing!

Wow. This was very good. Despite the simplicity of the piece, it draws in quite well.
Good job.