Love it! You write it so well ad the ending is excellent! It flows well!

Good one. Women change after you marry them or so I'm told. Keep up the work.

~SirScott

Way to not tell me you have new stuff up. I like this. It flows well and the rhymes don't seem too over done. The zing of humor is great too. :)

"I coveted my neighbor’s wife." 'Covet' is one of my favourite words, so naturally, I was drawn into the poem right away.

"Then I married my neighbor’s ex-wife, and regretted it for the rest of my life." This ending is very powerful. Even though the speaker's new wife used to 'give herself freely' to him, he still carries that guilt with him.

Good one...the rhymes are wonderful, and the ending is perfect in its irony, warning readers that even when the sin is done, the guilt can stay forever.

I think it would be interesting if you continued this. Maybe explain why the speaker regrets marrying the woman.

I also like how you rhymed 'thighs' and 'rise'

-Jessica

He he, i liked the ending, made me smile. :)
And the rhyming was well done, the flow of the peice too.
Bravo!