This sounds like the start of something great.. I love the characters pain that is completely coherent through the whole thing.. One thing.. At the end of the letter he was stalling out and seemed to be writing faster as he explained himself to the letters receiver.. Which works in a way by giving him a little bit of urgency to finish the letter.. But with a plan like his I'm sure he would be able to taKe his time. Other than that another well crafted world for the Goddess known as FOP.. Keep creating but don't pull an M and. Not finish.. M Eternal. FOP. Fanboy..

This is really interesting! You've left me with many questions, one being, how did he die? I really like paragraph 3. It shows a lot of emotion, and I like how it gives some extra details about the cabin boy. Can't wait to read more!