"Drenching me with sorrow." I like your use of the word 'drenching' here - it definitely makes this line come alive.

"Pulling me under the surface." I like the subtle allusion to psychoanalysis here.

"The black ocean of despair." Nice description. :)

Oh, wow that was dark, and deep, and emotional. I completely understand this piece...that was really good. I loved it, a lot.