I really like this story. The main character cracks me up.

I'm super intrigued by this story! Mainly I think Nate is really funny, and I loved him and his nephew. Please update soon!

srr, for being late... sowwy...
But I really do like this story,, it's got a nice catch :)

Aww, I love you too. I live mostly in my head, but my favourite vacations are the ones I spend with you. Would you like a pixel cookie to end the mushy moment?

0.0 ... Wow... That was sudden. Oh dear, and was he flirting? With Nate? And then that? Whoa. Seth has a lot of stuff on his plate... Oh dear indeed.

Uh oh, Sharon. :[
Oh God I hate sticky-ness. It irks me.
Haha, I remember that, I was on the lookout. Lol, drama queen indeed.

Well if that isn't just the way of the world; and by world I mean Luci's Lunch box, because apparently it is large enough to fit an entire planet into with lots of snarky hot guys and the men who lust after them. It really must be an awesome world to belong to, I mean I'm glad just to catch glimpses of it, but to live there? Even if it is for just half of a year. Well that would be heaven, or at least the best world I've ever known. Even better than, forgive me for this, Middle Earth. Oh! Dear. Hm, I wonder if Seth is "borrowing" a child too, or maybe..! -Disappears in a cloud of thought-

i accidentally read chappy 2 first >.

lolz! its wonderful I love it!

You're welcome. :3
Aren't little kids just so much fun?! Lol. This chapter made me laugh. xD And think of my cousin, Brandon. Just spent last week in Michigan with him. He's 8, and good LORD. I love him to death, but he can be a real brat. I should've spanked him. I DID accidentally knee him in the face at one point. Pfft. xD Then I accidentally scratched him when I was trying to see if he was ok because he started flailing around... the little punk.
And I'm sure it will turn out very well. :D

:o Sounds like it's gonna be another good one. :D
Can't wait for more.

more more more, this sounds more mature than the rest of your work :) they actually work and no longer go to school :P

Interseting.

xD
I love how his morning totally sucked then bam! Seth smiles at thim and makes his day.
=]
that's so sweet

Alarm clocks ruin everything. I can't wait for more!