"I want to paint myself 'passed out drunk.'" Ahaha! I love the idea that 'passed out drunk' is the name of a paint colour. That's awesome. ;)

"I know you wouldn't molest me in the wake of my incapacitation." WHOA. What a fan-f*cking-tastic line. (You know it's good when I start to swear :P).

"To raise Hell to save him." I love this line. The message here is so powerful. We're all waiting for someone to save us.

Keep up the wonderful work hun. :)

There are some beautiful lines here: "...I know...you..wouldn't molest me in the wake of my incapacitation." and "...will break me like waves on a sandbar." But once again, you overexplain your boundless compassion, as if you are seeking approval to save the world. Every idealist must learn that idealism is its own reward and if that isn't enough, we'd better change our outlook.