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Faithless Juliet 2009-09-05 . chapter 1
I liked the difference of how you saw this person, to how they actually act. You describe them as being beatific and grandiose, mourning their skin, and facial features. Yet you also describe the dirty cops and hung men. I liked how this shows how deeply we can idealize another person. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)
Isca 2009-08-20 . chapter 1
"Maybe then I can comprehend the death of an unloved one." I like this final line the best. It's interesting that we sometimes miss people that we never really liked when they were alive.
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