I like this as well, it does seem complete.

Keep it up.

So short, but so good! It has a nice rhythm to it!

Good job with this poem, and it is definitely a poem, but if you wish to lengthen this work, the only thing that you need to do is take your inner ** and run with it! You're CRYING and you can't FLY. Yes, you CAN ** about that for longer than three lines! :)

Keep writing!