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Treehugger22 2009-11-18 . chapter 44
A very interesting take on my favorite fairy tale. I enjoyed it very much. I would have liked it if Rose had been able to discover something about her background, there was so much suspense built up about the book, it just felt a little anticlimatic, though I guess maybe that was the point. Longer chapters would have been nice too but the story was a decent length so that makes up for it.

I loved how you developed Rose, I got a very good idea of who she was, and I liked a lot that Belle wasn't some evil little twit. In all I think it's great.

If you're ever bored and wanting something to write, an epilogue would be nice, see how the two turn out living at the castle, does William become a prince again? Where does it all go?

Great job! Keep writing!
your awesome reviewer 2009-10-30 . chapter 44
RIDICULOUS. it was like super cute. and he was naked. which was nice. very nice. oh. but you could have like done something about the book. was the uncles purpose from the beginning to *give motivation to rose so she could have the drive to learn how to read*? like what was the book about? just a joke played by the uncle or something that could really have brought rose to her parents? or did her parents know she would end up married to royalty? plot holes :x me no likeyy.
earthlybeauty 2009-10-21 . chapter 44
I loved the ending. And Rose and William drunk was really funny. I was laughing out loud when I read that chapter.
You're a great writer.:)
Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2009-10-20 . chapter 44
So sweet! Nice twist with the animals just being animals :) I really hadn't expected an ending so soon, but I think you tied it off really nicely! Supremely awesome story!
She is so Faux Pas 2009-10-20 . chapter 44
Aw, so cute! :D
I loved it, to the very end. So sweet. :]
LittleMissGrump 2009-10-20 . chapter 44
*sigh* what a good way to end a wonderful, not so classic favorite.

Amazing! This is a great read to end anyone's day. :D
That One Dork Stacey 2009-10-20 . chapter 44
Oh my god! That cannot be the end of the story! If it is, you should make a sequel :]




-Stace :D
tashler 2009-10-20 . chapter 44
FINALLY THERE TOGETHER: ONE WORD: YAY! love it! x
She is so Faux Pas 2009-10-18 . chapter 42
Haha! Leave it to Rose to clear up the awkwardness! Love her.
Aw. Now Belle has a lover too! Or is it a brother? awkwward...
:D
William, come on, buddy. Man up a bit and tell Rose before we all die of anticipation. ;D Just kidding. I love this story, so take your time. haha
LittleMissGrump 2009-10-18 . chapter 42
What a great way to start a Sunday morning! I'm happy that you posted. And the way Rose disarmed Rupert? Ah. Sounds just like what Rose would do!
tashler 2009-10-17 . chapter 42
I think this story is really really great! I love how fast you update! Keep it up! :)
Tibia's Lover. 2009-10-17 . chapter 42
You are adding more and more elements into this. It surely shows amazing progression. It is far more engrossing than I would have ever thought it could be. (No offense.)
LittleMissGrump 2009-10-16 . chapter 41
Wow. You've taken an already wonderful story and made it even more addicting. How did you do that? I love this! It's wonderfully written. I can't wait for an update. :P
She is so Faux Pas 2009-10-15 . chapter 41
-sighs-
Belle is fine and all that, but now that William is lighting up a bit in the brain section, she's just bothersome. ;D
Oh, Rose. Whatever shall I do with you? x]
Loved the chapter. Update soon. :D
And the last chapter was funny too, of course.
She is so Faux Pas 2009-10-13 . chapter 39
Haha. So now Belle and Louis [[possibly Henriette?]] know.
I just wish William would wake up a bit and see too. ;D
Love the story still! :D
Updates are always adored!
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