"This is a gift." I like the spiritual tone of this line - it compliments the wanton sense of sexuality in the previous line quite well.

"Show you places I have not been." I love this line. It's one of those romantic moments that really hits the reader - it's very profound. :)

"Let me take your hands and place them, just here." I absolutely love this opening line - it's gentle, tender, heart-warming, and divine.

"The colour of the Pre-Raphaelites." The Pre-Raphaelite movement is one of my favourites, so naturally, I commend you for alluding to it.

"I can conjugate you from memory." Wow. This is a very unique and creative line. The word 'conjugate' suggests that the speaker can 'change' this other person's personality with ease. That's terribly fascinating. :)

"We step into each other." YES! You have reached a new level of consciousness here.

"A baptism of kissess." Brilliant.

"I cannot give you much, but I can give you this." This ending is phenomenal. In fact, this entire piece is phenomenal. You should be very proud of yourself. :D