This is AMAZING! I just loved everything about this, I don't know why but I really did. The words fitted together perfectly and I loved the sounds of the words weaving together. The two poems in one was unbelievably well done.
Brilliant poem!

I am sadly, truly, enamored of this poem.

Great premise and originality,

hard to find in poetry.

When literature is stiff and old

Creativity turns cold.

Hey, this is really cool! I have to say I liked it better backwards, though it's a close call. Both ways it makes sense and still keeps its eloquence. I can imagine that it would be incredibly difficult to write a poem that makes sense read either way, so I'm very impressed!

Rae

Nice. I didn't think you were actually going to do it. It actually works pretty good. X3