| Reviews for Jihad |
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maceygirl 10/22/12 . chapter 22GO RESISTANCE! hahaha I just had to say that :) But dude you like updated quickly and you have no idea how happy I am! I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is such an awesome story! |
HeadOverHeelsInHate 10/22/12 . chapter 22Awesome! I'm wondering about Sarah's future importance... hmmmmm... Hehe. Declan totally knew. Love it! Update soon! |
Aurora Olivers 10/22/12 . chapter 22I also wanted to say sorry for the late reviews haha! But I like the way you introduced these new characters. Sarah is particularly fascinating, and I'm glad that things aren't all happy go lucky, it wouldn't fit to this story at this point. At least not yet! Once again you write some amazing stuff. I feel like all those persons you write about are real, but that's how a good story is supposed to make you feel. Looking forward to the next chapter! Aurora out |
xXxRandomKatxXx 10/22/12 . chapter 22Holy crap... you update fast! _ T'was reading chapter 21 and Chapter 22 appeared when I went to review. Yay! Great job, by the way. |
Aurora Olivers 10/22/12 . chapter 21Hallelujah! Finally haha! But okay now I just have one question, what bad thing will happen next? |
Gabriela 10/20/12 . chapter 21 I am absolutely in love with this. |
Helgabertoni 10/20/12 . chapter 21 Yay you finally updated! I've been waiting for you to update all week. As usual it was a well written and exciting chapter! Can't wait to read more, so update soon!:) |
maceygirl 10/20/12 . chapter 21Poor Alana! at least shes safe now. omg somethings going on between Declan and Bonnie! time for more drama lol i can't wait to read the next chapter and this was worth the wait :) |
HeadOverHeelsInHate 10/20/12 . chapter 21Awww! So cute! love it! Alex and Kiara are so adorable together. Ate they official yet? An the Alana scene was cute too! And GAHHH! I dot know what to think. Declan and Bonnie seem cute but then I remember Louise and I... aghh. Update soon! |
mAcHiNe4231 10/18/12 . chapter 20 omg u need to update I'm going insane over here waiting for more! _ |
mAcHiNe4231 10/10/12 . chapter 20 omg. so cute! I hope Alex comes out of his depression... you did a really good job of making it real. its really easy for ppl to trivialize those kinds of things. can't wait for the next chpt! |
Rose 10/10/12 . chapter 20 Absolutely brilliant! I've just spent the past few hours speeding through all these chapters. I'm in love with the story. Very relevant, informed and vivid. I can sense a little of the Tomorrow series by John Marsden, mixed with many dystopian-themed influences. The setting is refreshing! Being an Aussie myself, I was constantly intrigued by your use of locations and how you managed to make the story of rebellion so fitted to our country's unique geography, mish-mash of cultures and customs. The story also shows an awareness of world events, politics and history. Great job. I also deeply admire how you built up the personalities of the minor faction, however my only nitpick to make it even more of a great read than it is, is for more character development - especially in the lead-up the Seb's betrayal (Unless you have more up your sleeves, that is!) But the beauty of it is that since they are united as a front, there really isn't a need for too much depth, as most of their personalities, quirks and motives were created as a result of tragedy, and developed similarly as a direct consequence of this. One of my favourite reads on FictionPress so far! Keep it up :) |
maceygirl 10/9/12 . chapter 20OMG THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER AGAIN! you have no idea how happy I am right now. My brother is looking at me like I'm crazy lol And she heard the voice of her mom, this is such a happy chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter! people should review to this story. smh. i don't get what's so hard about it . lol |
Unicornswag 10/9/12 . chapter 20I'm so glad Kiara got back to the resistance, I was scared that she was going to be stuck alone at the old HQ. And i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the ending to this chapter! :) |
HeadOverHeelsInHate 10/9/12 . chapter 20YES! Booyah! She's back! That was so cute! Eek! UPDATE SOON! |