Aw this is a really cute piece. I think describing motherhood through a bird was a really interesting touch. It's not something you read about everyday. I also like the tone of annoyance with the bird. That was really realistic.

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Sounds like a mother indeed. lol...thanks for the great poem. Feels like a story actually. En core...or should say, Excellent work!

This was cute. Great job on this. Mamma's do have a tendency to be protective. It reminds me that there's a birds nest in my bedroom window and I'm thinkful that there's a pane of glass between them and me. Though before my cat died a few months ago she always got excited from hearing them, probably wishing the glass won't there. Anyways...Fantastic job on this. You're always a fantastic writer.

Aww, this is so sweet:) I can just picture the scene in my mind. Nice write, it made me smile :)

That was good. You were able to take a ordinary situation and make it comical, and still had a point to it. The only complaint I have is the ryhming seems too forced. Good poem though.

Cute! I love it! That's how I wrote my story, it was a dream! I can't wait to read more of your work!

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Cute. Funny how dreams can be so inspiring, I've had a few interesting and inspiring dreams myself. Nice work & keep writing, k. God bless!

Awe cute.Yeah mother animals can be alittle scary when protecting their young... so can human be ones too.

It was cute! The middle was a little dull and the lines were a choppy read, but the beginning and end were perfect!!